by Ellie R. Hunter
I wanted to like this book. I really did. But instead I found it to be only mildly entertaining at best. If you have read my About me page, you know that editing errors are usually not a huge deal for me. I make sure to mention them in a review because I know that some people find them hard to overlook. This book is an exception to the rule. I almost stop reading several times because the editing errors were consuming the story. It is not just typos or a slip up here and there.
This book contains a lot of grammatical errors, punctuation mistakes, tense mix ups, typos and even missing words. There were even parts where comas and periods were mixed up. To top it all of there were some slight story inconsistencies. Ahh! Continue reading
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